Analysis of Then God said yes



THEN GOD SAID YES

Fragile heart lost taste of love
Because of bad decisions,now torment hunts our lives.
They is feel of weak structure in capacity to hold the distress of our failures
Sudden change emotions are a scary offer on the table
Less belief in change brought nothing but hate
Can't understand the words the puzzle couldn't be cracked
Facts as fate can not define destiny
Look beyond and see look for something else
Once damage is done church becomes a hideout
Recreate our friendship with God but cause of it won't last
Then God said yes
Yes you can change
You can be the best in the game
You don't have to think you are lame
Just lay out the facts and be your best
Cause once you never leave the side of God all will be well


Scheme A xxxxxxxxxxAxbbxx
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 1011111 0111111101 1111110001001100111010 1010101010101010 1010111011 101010101011 1111101100 1010111101 1101110101 10101011111111 1111 1111 11101001 11111111 111010111 11110101111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 760
Words 157
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 16
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 295
Words per stanza (avg) 70

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God is always there for us

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Written on December 20, 2021

Submitted by Xabawrldd on December 22, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lone walker

Poets from xabaworld are young ...who have teamed up to create awareness of all events of life through poetry. It is led by Stephen Zaba , co partners include Blessing Musona, Kristin and Lorraine.They are based in bindura and they are still high school students.On YouTube they use the name Xaba wrld poems . more…

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