Analysis of A Consolation Message From the Departed



Do not fret and blindly stare
as if your life has suddenly come
to a halt,
thinking too much…
and even wondering
whether in some unknown manner,
it is your fault.

Life certainly has its ups and downs.
The road is always curving, never straight.
Your task while here…
is simply not to scowl or frown.
Just keep on smiling, friends…
before it is too late and, while waiting,
make your just  amends.

THE DEPARTED ONE:

And as for me, your friend,
your lifetime partner,
who once walked this earth
in tandem, right beside you,
I’ve moved to somewhere else,
to greener pastures…
My everlasting place of berth.

So, do not sit and mope
at what you fear is my demise.
Do not think there is no hope,
or whine, or pine, or close your eyes.
For, ever shining like the sun,
You and I, and everyone else,
again shall surely rise.


Scheme XXAXBCA XXXXDBD E XCFXGXF HIHIEGI
Poetic Form
Metre 1110101 111111001 101 1011 010100 10010110 1111 110011101 011110101 1111 11011111 111101 0111110110 11101 00101 011111 1110 11111 0101011 11111 11010 1010111 111101 11111101 1111111 11111111 11010101 1010101 011101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 844
Words 180
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 1, 7, 7
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 126
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

Just as the sun sets, but eternally rises, so must all of us, living under the sun, rejoice and be satisfied that the dark shadows of our lives can be overcome by the brightness in our hearts.

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Written on December 27, 2021

Submitted by karlcfolkes on December 27, 2021

Modified by karlcfolkes on June 23, 2022

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Karl Constantine FOLKES

Retired educator of Jamaican ancestry with a lifelong interest in composing poetry dealing particularly with the metaphysics of self-reflection; completed a dissertation in Children’s Literature in 1991 at New York University entitled: An Analysis of Wilhelm Grimm’s ‘Liebe Mili’ (translated into English as “Dear Mili”), Employing Von Franzian Methodological Processes of Analytical Psychology. The subject of the dissertation concerned the process of Individuation. more…

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