Analysis of Closed-Eye Hallucinations



Awake, my eyes closed.
I see dancing images.
A kaleidoscope!


Scheme ABC
Poetic Form Haiku 
Tercet 
Metre 01111 1110100 0010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 60
Words 12
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 47
Words per stanza (avg) 10

About this poem

Diagnosed with ocular sarcoidosis, I thrive comfortably with this experience: Swirling colorful patterns, neurons firing with excitation on my brain, phosphenes of electrical charges on my retina, a kaleidoscope of energy.

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Written on December 30, 2021

Submitted by karlcfolkes on December 30, 2021

Modified on April 08, 2023

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Karl Constantine FOLKES

Retired educator of Jamaican ancestry with a lifelong interest in composing poetry dealing particularly with the metaphysics of self-reflection; completed a dissertation in Children’s Literature in 1991 at New York University entitled: An Analysis of Wilhelm Grimm’s ‘Liebe Mili’ (translated into English as “Dear Mili”), Employing Von Franzian Methodological Processes of Analytical Psychology. The subject of the dissertation concerned the process of Individuation. more…

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