Analysis of EVIL AFTER MIDNIGHT

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



Loathsome creatures hunt
Throughout the streets and alleys,
After darkfall slowly descends
Smothering the light of day.

Monstrous creatures calling
As through the dark, they're lumbering,
While safely tucked up in bed
Guileless folk are slumbering.

Vampires circling overhead
As, below werewolfs are calling,
Blue Men and egrigores lurk
While evil shoggoths are squalling.

Crawlers leave an acidic slime
That marks their loathsome path,
While hidden within the shadows
Atrocities hunt through the dark.

Wyvern and night gaunts shriek
As through the night, they fly,
Seeking out human meat
As innocents are passing by.

Horrors of all persuasions
Are hunting out human prey,
Hoping soon to rudely feast
Before the light of a new day.

Abominations closing in on
People they soon hope to kill,
While on the town's outskirts
Foul behemoths loudly shrill.

Evil soon after midnight
Fills up the empty town,
As Manticores fly just above
Horrid burrowers underground.

Wise folk quickly leave this place
Within the early morn,
Fleeing for their very lives
Soon after the break of dawn.

THE END
© Copyright 2022 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XXXA BBCB CBXB XXXX XDXD XAXA XEFE XXXX XXXX XFX
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 0101010 1011001 1000111 101010 11011100 1101101 1011100 10100101 1011110 11011 110111 1110101 111101 1100101 01001101 10111 110111 101101 11001101 1011010 1101101 1011101 01011011 11001 1011111 11011 1010101 101101 110101 111101 1010010 1110111 010101 1011101 1100111 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,157
Words 209
Sentences 10
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 18

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Loathsome creatures hunt Throughout the streets and alleys, After darkfall slowly descends Smothering the light of day.

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Written on December 08, 2021

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on January 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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