Analysis of NIGHT FIENDS LURKING

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



On a starless night
Evil fiends are lurking,
Plotting dreadful schemes
And all their schemes are working.

Evil after midnight
In this loathsome town,
As unwary townies sleep
Evil fiends abound.

Slithering, hopping creatures
From some nightmare place,
Stealing sleeping victims
While leaving little trace.

Blood-supping monsters
From neither future nor past,
Come to life in our time
To do their evil task.

Life essences drained
Leaving a lifeless husk,
Which collapses at first light
Leaving mounds of dust.

Barely a clue remains
Of what these fiends have done,
As they slink into shadows
As the daylight comes.

Then as the night has fallen
Horrid screeching emanates,
Like a Banshee signalling
Some lost soul’s awful fate.

From an unlit house
Slithering in the dark,
Then from a bedroom-sit
Soon shrill screaming starts.

Till no-one here is living
So the creature slinks away,
To find another victim
In some other forlorn place.

THE END
© Copyright 2022 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme ABXB AXXX CDED CXXX XXAX XFXE FXBX XXXX BXXD XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 101110 10101 0111110 10101 01101 101011 10101 1001010 1111 101010 110101 1110 1101011 1110101 111101 111 100101 1010111 10111 100101 111111 111011 1011 1101110 1010100 1001100 111101 1111 100001 11011 11101 1111110 1010101 1101010 0110011 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,013
Words 188
Sentences 10
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 81
Words per stanza (avg) 16

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On a starless night Evil fiends are lurking, Plotting dreadful schemes And all their schemes are working.

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Written on June 06, 2011

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on January 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

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