Analysis of Sudden impact

Doreene Felder 1967 (Phila.)



A sudden change
Can change your life
You can be free
You can be homeless
You can be lost
Or you can be saved
What ever the case may be
A sudden impact
Can change your life
You can end up
Places you never been before
You can be sleeping out
Side some one else door
You can be riding the train
Back and forth
Eventually something must happen
But you gotta move on
The choice is now yours
Don't make it on your own
We have a God
That's in charge
He can change everything
If you rebell
You can end up in jail
If you don't care
You won't know that
God's right there.


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Poetic Form
Metre 0101 1111 1111 11110 1111 11111 1100111 01001 1111 1111 10110101 111101 11111 1111001 101 0100010110 111011 01111 111111 1101 101 11110 111 111101 1111 1111 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 574
Words 128
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 27
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 440
Words per stanza (avg) 116

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Just being a step away from what ever

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Written on January 29, 2022

Submitted by doreenefelder191 on January 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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