Analysis of OUT IN THE NIGHT

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



Out in the sinister night
Preternatural beings prowling,
As through the horrid darkness
Unseen terrors are growling

Mischievous figures are stalking
As you walk the streets all alone,
Unaware you are being followed
As you head towards your home.

Predators are lurking nearby
Hiding in the monstrous shadows,
Planning to leap out at you soon
As the last hint of light quickly goes.

Destructive beings are out hunting
Anything foolish enough to breathe,
As the terrible night is descending
All hope for survival surely leaves.

Malicious mischief-makers move slowly
Ever slowly as they head in your direction,
Keeping carefully just out of your sight
Despite casting a menacing reflexion.

Out in the torrid night
Baleful figures encroaching
Upon your personal space
As midnight is approaching.

Baneful cawing is echoing
Throughout the awful skies,
As with a loud beating of wings
Something your way swiftly flies.

As you start to run for safety
Shrill shrieking is filling the air,
In the distance, you see your house
But is there still time to reach there?

THE END
© Copyright 2022 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme ABXB BCXX XDXD BXBX EXAC ABXB BFXF EGXG XXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1001001 11010 1101010 0110110 10010110 11101101 01111010 1110111 10011011 1000101 10111111 101111101 010101110 10100111 1010011010 111010101 0101010110 101011101010 1010011111 011001001 100101 1010010 0111001 111010 111100 010101 11011011 1011101 11111110 11011001 00101111 11111111 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,134
Words 205
Sentences 8
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 20

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Out in the sinister night Preternatural beings prowling, As through the horrid darkness Unseen terrors are growling

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Written on August 13, 2021

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on February 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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