Analysis of As the Day Begins
Tammie Conyer 1963 (augusta)
As The Day Begins
The curtains fly open to greet the sun into the home.
The covers fall back and expose the rested body ready for the day.
The warmth of the comforter that was snuggled all around you is broken by the alarm blaring in your ear.
Your best friend ready to pounce and play giving licks of love all over your face.
The coffee maker much to far away to just roll over and start so the smell can awaken you.
The thanking of our maker for this day that ha not been seen before by anyone except for the who made it.
As you stand the blessings fall upon you and the feeling is welcoming and warm.
As the day begins someone is alone hurting, needing of the sun to shine on them.
Waiting, waiting, waiting for their blessing to come as the day begins.
The blessing that is in us, that which is born in us, that which is not realized until, It can be awaken by us as the day begins.
Those demons awake for some and the darkness sets in for a long day of havoc as their day begins.
The steps of forgiveness must be practiced and set forth for progress to begin again.
Our yearning of love ,life, finances and the thoughts for the future are all here.
The memories of the past hurts disappointments, lies deceit have all waken up too
As the Day Begins
T.Conyer
Scheme | A x x b x c x x x a a a x bc Ab |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10101 01011011010101 010110010101010101 01101001111011110100110011 1111011011011111011 0101011101111100110110101 0101101011111111011100110111 11101010110010110001 10101110110101011111 10101011101110101 0101101111101111110011110101110101 1100111001010101111011101 01101011100111110101 10101110100011010111 010010110010101111011 10101 1 |
Characters | 1,316 |
Words | 273 |
Sentences | 15 |
Stanzas | 15 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2 |
Lines Amount | 17 |
Letters per line (avg) | 59 |
Words per line (avg) | 15 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 66 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 17 |
About this poem
This poem was written for a brand new day
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Written on January 12, 2022
Submitted by tjkg55 on January 11, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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