Analysis of Paradise

Nandni Sharma 2005 (Delhi)



The sight of,

Gangtok’s lightning street light,

The mesmerizing Tashi View Point’s daylight and twilight,

The Tsomgo lake’s color changing specialite,

And the nonpareil work on monastries shines as a star bright.

There is a Paradise on the earth.

The paradise where Raju became a gentleman,

where a Colonel turned to a freshman.

The paradise where Barfi was born as a deaf mute man

And where a college was saved by a friends clan.

The traditional Thangka painting is exquisite,

Phagshapa, Sale roti and thukpa are lucious to eat.

Maghe mela is the largest splendid feat,

And the dress of men and women are consummete’.


Scheme X A A A A X B B C C X D D A
Poetic Form
Metre 011 11011 0100111101 01110101 00111111011 11010101 010110010100 101011010 010111110111 01010111011 001001101100 1110011111 111010101 0011101011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 639
Words 130
Sentences 6
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 35
Words per stanza (avg) 8

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Written on August 22, 2021

Submitted by abhinandni2005 on January 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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