Analysis of STANDING UP
Joni Spearman 1976 (Ga)
Eyes like fire trying to hold back the tears
Chest so tight you can't take a breath
Screaming inside but no one can hear
Many regrets cross my mind as I look at years past
So many good memories that I don't want to take back
I am damaged goods
No good for love
Pain has taken over and assumed me to the core
Left bitter inside like waking bear
How long does it last?
Am I strong enough to withstand the storm?
The pain inside hurts like a sharp and burning pain to the stomach
The breath you can't take
Eyes and throat burn like lit end of a cigarette
Choking back the tears
Can I just scream and release it in the sky?
Well I am getting off the ground and wiping away the tears
I see the truth and my mind is clear
You were not the person you say
So it is finally goodbye
I am looking up
Feeling the sun on my face
So no more I love you or I miss you, or can I come over
I don't need you anymore
Your touch is no longer a desire
Your kiss is poison and you will never taste my lips again
Scheme | AXX BX XXCX BXXXXAD AXXDXXECEX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11101011101 11111101 100111111 1001111111111 11011001111111 11101 1111 1110100011101 110011101 11111 1110110101 0101110101011010 01111 10111111001 10101 11110011001 111101010100101 110101111 10101011 1111001 11101 1001111 1111111111111110 111101 1111100010 111100111011101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,025 |
Words | 218 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 2, 4, 7, 10 |
Lines Amount | 26 |
Letters per line (avg) | 30 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 155 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 42 |
About this poem
About heartache and learning how stand on your own.
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Written on April 26, 2021
Submitted by jonimarie76 on January 09, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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