Analysis of The Room



The walls up high.
Freedom not nigh
Crowded rooms, unheard yet blooms
Reassurance seeking from streams of inauthentic chords.
I run and I run until the journey doesn't stop.


Scheme AABCD
Poetic Form Cinquain  (40%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 0111 1011 1010111 0101011111 1101101010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 174
Words 31
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 140
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

This poem is dedicated to all the talented people in the world. Who despite of their mental health issues come out of they situation and uplift others through writing, art, music.

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Written on August 01, 2022

Submitted by mon5mackness on January 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Monica Mackness

Fond of music, art, dance, nature,writing Why did I start writing As a kid I had the habit of writing diary's, making art something like scrapbook. Writing down my favourite Lyrics. Getting my hands dirty with colours, stickers. Hahahaha that's fun. Somewhere in this busy life, I stopped doing them all. I must say recently I found back my passion a year ago. All thanks to God. I felt it was a miracle for me. From then I didn't stop writing. I write to clear my mind, I write because I feel good, I write when I feel appreciated, I write to let the world know about the people who shaped me into the woman I have become Heal Build Conquer is my Motto In order to be successful in life, be successful in mind body and spirit. more…

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