Analysis of waiting for the Doctor



Sitting in the exam room
Waiting for the doctor.
Just being here
I feel better already.
I’m sure it’s nothing.

He’ll say “”Cut down the bourbon
And get more exercise.”

The carpet is unobtrusive
The walls are painted a soothing blue

The diplomas on the wall
Tell me this guy
“Knows his stuff.

But,The skeleton in the corner
Says,”Doesn’t matter

You’ll look just like me soon enough”.


Scheme XAXXX XX XX XXB AA B
Poetic Form Tetractys  (33%)
Metre 1000011 101010 1101 1110010 11110 1111010 01110 0101010 011100101 0010101 1111 111 11000010 110 11111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 397
Words 70
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 2, 2, 3, 2, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 50
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Written on March 22, 1951

Submitted by ericb51 on January 13, 2022

Modified on April 25, 2023

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Eric Barr

Eric Barr started writing poetry after surviving a stroke as a way to remember moments, events, and feelings more…

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