Analysis of What I Miss

LaDonna Hatcliff 1962 (Kansas City)



Playing all day long
Singing him a song

Rocking him to sleep
Hushing every peep

Reading Dr. Suess
like a silly goose

Giving him a bath
Before his daytime nap

Sharing our dreams
because we are a team

Giving him a hug and kiss
Those are the things I miss.


Scheme AA BB CX XX XX CC
Poetic Form
Metre 10111 10101 10111 11001 1011 10101 10101 01111 10101 011101 1010101 110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 261
Words 58
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 34
Words per stanza (avg) 8

About this poem

I lost custody of my son and at the time this poem helped me work through my devastation and loss.

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Written on February 28, 2001

Submitted by LaDonna on January 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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LaDonna Hatcliff

In high school I started writing poetry and has ever since been a passion for me. I play the piano and love music. I work at home doing prior authorizations and love helping people. I have one son I’m very proud of and he’s the love of my life. more…

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