Analysis of NOBODY GETS OUT ALIVE

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



In the land of the dead
Nobody ever gets out alive,
Only toxic plant forms grow
And only worthless things can thrive.

In a place where no-one goes by choice
And nobody would ever call home,
Maleficent creatures are abounding
So never dare go outside alone.

It's a place where only lost souls go
And the successful carefully avoid,
Where red sandy deserts surround
As well as evil forests of mutant cactoids.

Foul carnivores and omnivores
Run hunting through the darkness,
Looking for living things to eat
While running through the starkness.

In a land where no-one dares to hope
Nobody can get out alive,
The Grim Reaper's persistent call
Makes it difficult to even survive.

In the land of the dead
Where nobody even dares to dream,
Every movement leads to terror
And every sound could make you scream.

When nightmares are a way of life
There's little chance by night or day,
And in this land of broken promises
Only melancholy ever holds sway.

In this place of ugly things
Where no sign of beauty does abound,
Only wickedness fills the night
And all the innocents go to ground.

THE END
© Copyright 2022 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme Abcb dxxx cxed dxxx xbxb Afxf xgxg xexe xxx
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 001101 1101101 1010111 01010111 001111111 0111011 1101010 110111101 101110111 0001010001 11101001 11110101101 11001 1101010 10110111 1101010 001111111 111101 0110101 1110011001 001101 1110111 100101110 010011111 1110111 11011111 0011110100 101001011 0111101 111110101 10100101 010100111 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,159
Words 226
Sentences 9
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 22

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In the land of the dead Nobody ever gets out alive, Only toxic plant forms grow And only worthless things can thrive.

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Modified on April 07, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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