Analysis of BATWINGED FIENDS APPROACHING

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



Bat-winged fiends are approaching
Gliding silently through the night,
Seeking out late-night walkers
Then softly they're taking flight.

Winging bat-like just overhead
Watching intended prey below,
Following swiftly from above
Waiting to strike a fatal blow.

Hovering 'above an intended meal
Watching with red glowing eyes,
Yellow fangs protruding out
Evil is winging through the skies.

A corpse-like smell fills the air
As the undead is floating by,
Werewolf's baying at the moon
As bat-wing death gives out a cry!

Walking slowly underneath
Humans smell a noxious odour,
Looking up, their hearts Tom-Tom
Seeing death a jaundice yellow.

At the vision, one man faints
The other runs furiously at the sight,
Of an unexpected monstrosity
Winging slowly in low flight.

Bat-winged fiends are approaching
Chasing after fleeing human beings,
Shrieking as they run wildly
Terrified, yet not truly believing.

A man-like demon descends upon
People galloping through the night,
Beginning rending and devouring
Flesh, beneath the blood moon's light.

THE END
© Copyright 2022 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme Abcb xdxd xexe fgxg xfxd cbhb Axha xbab xxx
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111010 10100101 1011110 1101101 10111101 10010101 10010101 10110101 1000110101 1011101 1010101 10110101 0111101 1011101 110101 11111101 101001 1010101 1011111 10101010 1010111 01011000101 110100100 1010011 1111010 1010101010 1011110 101110010 011100101 10100101 0101000100 1010111 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,116
Words 193
Sentences 9
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 19

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Bat-winged fiends are approaching Gliding silently through the night, Seeking out late-night walkers Then softly they're taking flight.

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Written on February 23, 2022

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on March 06, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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