Analysis of Moonlight Shivers

Daniel Rankin 1953 (Yakima Wa)



Got to go and head for the moon
I went outside and heard the loon
I know it is not midnight nor is it noon
So I may be mistaken and heard a goon

So will go back outside one more time and see if it is just a shadow or a night time moon
It is just a sliver
So it might make me shiver
The night has just begun
So I will go out side and try to run

That might hurt my legs
Or it might make me lay an egg
Which if that happens it will be a yoke all over my face
And I will not even have a shoe with a lace.


Scheme AAAA ABBCC XXDD
Poetic Form
Metre 11101101 11110101 1111111111 11110100101 1111111110111110110111 111010 1111110 011101 1111110111 11111 11111111 111101110111011 011110101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 503
Words 120
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 4
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 127
Words per stanza (avg) 39

About this poem

This is about the experiences of a cold winter night in a last quarter of a moon phase and how it affects my outlook on life.

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Written on February 13, 2022

Submitted by Danrankin on February 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Daniel Rankin

I am an American who once served in the military and was educated through the Montgomery bill and earned a degree in history, English, math and science. It helped me to teach and stretch the imagination of 12 years of children for seven years. more…

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