Analysis of Take Heed



Alone I stand upon a cliff.
Eyes wand’ring o’er the ocean’s drift;
I ponder long on legends great,
E’er ancient kingdoms met their fate.

For long ago, long since forgot,
Fair men of old faced fiery dart
‘Mid battle tumult, standing tall
Til war was won and dragon fall.

Alas! Their sons remembered not,
Nor cared to think of kindred lost,
But rather stopped their ears and said,
“For mine alone I’ll win my bread”.

And so the ancient lands would fall,
Their children conquered, brought to thrall,
Deposed, destroyed, crushed into dust
By their own selfish, wanton lusts.

Thus, as I stand above the shore
And muse upon the tales of yore,
I fear for many of my kin
Who follow swift those former men.

Let not desire take hold your heart
For kingly gain or sovereign’s part,
Lest blind you turn away your gaze
And meet demise e’er break of day.

For from such shade is little hope
To break aside that filthy yoke:
So guard your hearts and steel your souls
To overcome the mortal foe.


Scheme XXAA BCDD BXEE DDXF GGXX CCFX XXFX
Poetic Form
Metre 01110101 1110101 11011101 11010111 11011101 111111001 11010101 11110101 01110101 11111101 11011101 11011111 01010111 11010111 01011011 11110101 11110101 01010111 11110111 11011101 110101111 11011101 11110111 01011111 11111101 11011101 11110111 1100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,015
Words 209
Sentences 9
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 26

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Learn from the past to secure the future

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Written on August 20, 2019

Submitted by Dirhaval on February 03, 2022

Modified on May 03, 2023

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Shelby Minick

Shelby grew up reading from a young age and was encouraged to try her hand at different writing styles throughout her schooling years. She began writing poetry several years ago, and her influences are such poets as Tennyson, Longfellow, Kipling, and Tolkien, to name a few. more…

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