Analysis of Dodson Dragons

Brady Bowen 1973 (Louisiana)



red and blue and green and yellow
are the raincoats of the little ones
sunbright are those rainbow-boots
stomp stamp jump those puddle killers

sweaty faces producing gales
of the cotton-candied laughter of youth
Acadiana-hot it is
as august lumbers to the finish-ribbon

these are the mornings in our Elysium
the knowledge-Nirvana
a butler-buildinged test score temple
self-appointed elementary school elite

instructors line our concrete corridor
affirmation and admonition-missioned
the sculptors of malleable minds
a red carpet of sorts
and we are momentarily celebrities


Scheme XXXX XXXX XXXA XAXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10101010 10110101 11111 11111010 10100101 1010101011 1111 1101101010 110100100100 010010 01011110 1010010101 01011001100 01000101 010110001 011011 01101000100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 584
Words 96
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 120
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

My first educational experience

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Written on March 09, 2022

Submitted by BradyB999 on March 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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