Analysis of ÆONS OF DARKNESS



Æons of darkness keep on
Drowning your naked mind,
Drenching you in sorrows
As your sanity does unwind.

Æons of calamities are still
Tormenting your very soul,
Echoing throughout your life
Your dreams are put on hold,

Æons of horror is stalking
'Cross the void of time and space,
Holding back your upward move
Locking you in this awful place.

Æons of disasters playing out
Within your short lifetime,
Keeping you in icy darkness
Far away from summer climes.

Æon long holocausts daunting
Haunting you all day and night,
Bring you monstrous images
Parading within your sight.

Æons of darkness flooding
Through your tortured mind,
Make you long for a better place
Way back in some distant time.

Æon long terrors are recalling
Catastrophes from long ago,
Before the decades overwhelmed
Before your hair turned to snow.

Æon long nightmares rain
Within your sleeping brain,
Shredding your very sanity
Slowly driving you insane.

THE END
© Copyright 2022 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XAXA XXXX BCXC XDXX BEXE BACD BFXF GGXG XXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 111011 101101 101010 11100101 11010011 101101 1000111 111111 1110110 1011101 1011101 10101101 11010101 01111 10101010 1011101 11110 1011101 1110100 0100111 111010 11101 11110101 1101101 11101010 01001101 0100101 0111111 1111 011101 10110100 1010101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,009
Words 187
Sentences 8
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

Was trying to write a horror poem, but the verses just wouldn't go there. Rather than force the poem, I let it take its own direction. Came up with the title last August; wrote the poem today.

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Written on March 25, 2022

Submitted by philip0157 on March 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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