Analysis of 13th reason in action



Dark clouds fill the sky, taking away the sunshine
Day turns to night, and that smiles starts to fade
Tonight's the night you've made up your mind
Your leaving tonight and not coming back
People are losing but you may gain
That fake smile will be no more
An after life awaits for you
Say goodbye for the last time

It starts on the bridge, high from the ground
And ends in the water, that rushes below
You leave this world, the perfect weather
Your body afloats, the blood gushes out
The water is red, and bubbles float up
Your life is no more, but not to worry
There's more beyond the void
The after life is yours to take cause
You've said goodbye for the last time  


Scheme XXXXXXXA XXXXXXXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 11101100101 1111011111 010111111 1100101101 101101111 1111111 11010111 111011 111011101 01001011001 111100110 110101101 0101101011 1111111110 110101 010111111 1111011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 671
Words 132
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 9
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 263
Words per stanza (avg) 64

About this poem

TW: Suicide its about someone that has been wanting to end it all, and they finally did it

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Written on March 28, 2022

Submitted on April 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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