Analysis of Evenings Remiss

Lance Walker-Lowery 1988 (Mt Vernon, Wa)



Standing tall among the giants I once called heros fallen together. Tethered amongst the heedless their heights only once seen from within smokes memory. Wisps of once before adored seldom for thoughts sheltered amongst the shade of what we know we've made. A long goodbye tearing eye and of kissed, a toll rolling face. To look beyond the dawning lights to see evening's delight knowingly graceful reserved for them among the tops of the knowing. To be given of something never severed but dropped of distances longingly embraced in goodbyes loving arms reaching and reaching. Sadness grown aloft the winds, gentle caress attest the crested breast of rests cradle. To rattle once more adorning the comforts rocking ways, to stave off wild days that soothe fears blown raise.


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Sentences 8
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Feelings provoked staring at evening light on a fir trees top.

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Written on February 21, 2022

Submitted by MootCrescent on March 03, 2022

Modified by MootCrescent on December 17, 2022

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Lance Walker-Lowery

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