Analysis of Meteoric



Meteoric
How alike we are to meteors?
Challenging ourselves, diving into the atmosphere.
Facing the friction – the burning away that shapes and twirls us – out of control
Finding our groove, gaining our vision and heading for a target
Only to realize that to stay the course, we must burn up and die.
How many of us realize that by rising above the burn
By lifting ourselves above that chafing atmosphere
We might sustain our lives and make the most of the time we have?
And, perhaps, take a better angle on those goals we hope so to achieve.
In time, we will all enter the atmosphere.
Most of us will burn up, helpless to right ourselves.
But a few of us will make an impact.


Scheme ABCDEFGCHICJK
Poetic Form
Metre 010 101111100 1000011001010 1001001001110111101 101011010100101010 1011011101111101 110111011100101 1100010111010 1101101010110111 001101010111111101 0111110010 1111111011001 1011111101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 680
Words 134
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 533
Words per stanza (avg) 127

About this poem

This is a poem I wrote about the decisions and challenges many of us face as professionals and in our personal lives.

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Written on May 30, 2015

Submitted by Neeber on March 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Bruce Neeb

Bruce Neeb is a Wisconsin native. Trained as a journalist, now retired. Bruce won awards as a television reporter and video producer and has been inspired by poetry throughout his life. more…

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