Analysis of My Beautiful Loving Tree



Could my hands stop the strong wind blowing its leaves while my tree was softly falling asleep?
No, they couldn’t, I couldn’t.
My soul is broken, I feel the pain
While my tree was softly falling asleep.

Yet, later
a soft feeling took hold of my whole being.
Memories? Yes! From those wonderful days
when a colorful little bird sang happily
on a branch of my beautiful loving tree.

Could these feelings be stolen by someone else?
No, they are mine, just mine and always will be.


Scheme AXXA XXXBB XB
Poetic Form
Metre 111101110111111101001 11111 111101101 1111101001 110 01101111110 1001111001 101001011100 10111100101 1110110111 1111110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 483
Words 95
Sentences 9
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 2
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 125
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

It was dedicated to my daughter-in-law who recently lost both parents

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Written on March 01, 2022

Submitted by Omaira on March 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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