Analysis of Poem for Aidan



Poem for Aidan

My voice is weak but my love is strong
 He does not mind as I sing my songs
I rub his back as he falls asleep
 He does not mind as my love is deep!

I'm glad to have his soul so near
  I know one day he will not be here
I yearn to see what he will grow to be
 Though I'm sad as he won't still be with me

He grows wiser by the day
 But he still laughs and he likes to play
Yet soon I know he will go away
 For boys become men
That is just the way

So I'm glad that we have had this time
 Though it's sad that life is like this rhyme
And while dreams drift ever far away, so
 I drink his love every chance I may

So I sing him my songs, though my voice is weak
 And listen to his breath as he falls asleep
For someday soon he will a man
 And his heart will be in another’s hand.


Scheme X XXAA XXBB CCCXC DDXC XAXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10110 111111111 111111111 111111101 111111111 11111111 111111111 1111111111 1111111111 1110101 111101111 111111101 11011 11101 111111111 111111111 0111101011 1111100111 11111111111 01011111101 1111101 01111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 798
Words 185
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 29

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A poem regarding the trajectory of a son's life and his Dad's desperate love

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Written on November 27, 2021

Submitted by scott4hart on March 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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