Analysis of Breaking love



You held my hand so
 tight.We watched the
stars all night,But soon realize
There's something in your eyes.
The way you sway and the
way you say “I love you”.
But it was clear it wasn’t
true The way you say

that we are meant to be
with sparkles in your eyes
It’s killing every piece of me,
So If you could only see the way
 you're hurting me.

There's no doubt you really care,
But you’ve fallen in love with
another man,
anger has balled up inside but my
 Tone is calm
 when we speak
But When you go
away to see him
But
I’ll smile, keeping the anger inside
So It doesn't hurt you.
Riser might have
Better looks but
He is not the one For you
But it's your heart that you can only share.
So you walk away that very day
 with those sparkling eyes like
 nothing happened that day but I’m denied every time,
Even though you tried your best to love me,
It just wasn’t meant to be, and so then I’ll set you free.
With a hug and kiss as we say our good-byes.
It's hard for me to let go,
But it's the only way we know
To spare you from suffering
And to save my heart from
dying in the dark and all alone
But It's true you want my
happiness, but you need to
Be ever so happy
But now it's time to be honest,
stop your lies in April
And as much as it hurts, I'm going to say
it now. It's time for you to break your vows.

Still I’ll thank you for
 everything you’ve done my dear,
And it's your love I'll
forever be missing,
So now that I have to go,
Remember what we had
was never a show.

I love you my dear and so I’m fearing
You'll be miserable if I’m near,
So take this chance and explore the
 world with your shiny red hair
And let your heart be your sword!

Goodbye, my love, and be happy where ever you are
I'll be fine, you have nothing to worry about
I’ll be waiting for you my dear
Take his hand and you will see
That he was never your destiny!!


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Poetic Form
Metre 11111 110 111110 110011 011100 111111 111111 10111 111111 110011 110100111 111110101 1101 1111101 1110011 0101 101110111 111 111 1111 01111 1 111001001 111011 1011 1011 1110111 1111111101 111011101 111011 10101111011001 1011111111 1111110111111 101011111011 1111111 11010111 1111100 011111 100010101 111111 1001111 110110 11111110 111010 01111111011 1111111111 11111 101111 01111 010110 1111111 010111 11001 1111101110 111000111 11110010 1111011 0111111 111011011011 111111011001 11101111 1110111 111101100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,899
Words 426
Sentences 13
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 8, 5, 33, 7, 5, 5
Lines Amount 63
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 232
Words per stanza (avg) 63
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Submitted by Fishbackam on April 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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