Analysis of Unwanted
You told me lies, about my life
You taught me hate, but not how to love
This cult I was a part of yet you called it family.
You saw the scars of Abuse, you cherished the faces of my abusers.
The beginning you told me I was wanted, but I was given the truth, the abortion failed, is this why you tortured me in my youth?
I did everything the cult wanted I bent to their every whim, the years of knowing you wasn't proud of me, yet you was of him.
My brother the abusers son. Got all your love when I thought you had none
Still the pain hurts, you wanted him.
Then the abusers changed, one by one you all took a piece of me. And left me this shell of a human never to be.
Yet broken I was found my heart grew hope. The moment I met my angel I was saved.
My Angel asked about the scars, he saw them first hand. He grew tired of the cults demand.
He was vengeance, he was a storm.
The wrath he dealt was fury with a form
Yet he held me softly, he held my soul aloft
And showered me in love.
Yet I hurt my Angel time and time again
All because the poisoning it never ran out.
My angel he waits for me to heal.
It is I who runs to him and with redemption in my heart I shall yield.
Scheme | XABX X C X CB XX DDXA XXXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11110111 111111111 11110111111100 110110111001011010 001011111101111001001011111101011 11100110111110010111011011111111 110001011111111111 10111101 10010111111101110111110101011 110111111101011110111 1101010111111111010101 11101101 0111110101 111110111101 010101 11111010101 101010011011 110111111 111111101010011111 |
Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 1,194 |
Words | 271 |
Sentences | 17 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 19 |
Letters per line (avg) | 47 |
Words per line (avg) | 13 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 112 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 31 |
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Written on April 27, 2022
Submitted by Vanadis on April 27, 2022
Modified on April 27, 2023
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