Analysis of MALEVOLENT FIENDS



Malevolent fiends are sleeping
Hiding safely underground,
Cowering from the burning rays
Waiting until the sun goes down.

Malignant creatures rampaging
Through the streets at twilight,
Pillaging, plundering, murdering
Throughout the loathsome night.

Abhorrent beings are lurching
Along like zombies of old,
Barely used to walking around
Since their corpses went cold.

Repellent graveyard horrors
Indescribably awful things,
Mouldy, shrouded entities
No longer human beings.

Repulsive lifeless beasts
Out of some terrible tale,
Slinking out after Darkfall
Though in painful travails.

Malevolent fiends are hunting
Through the darkened streets,
Hoping soon to feast upon
Some fresh-killed human meat.

Obnoxious shadows haunting
Within a town called Death,
Terrifying the coldest heart
Carrying away your final breath.

Nauseating slimy foulness
Slickens this invidious land,
Like rivers of blood flowing
Across the burnished sand.

THE END
© Copyright 2022 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme ABXX ACAC ADBD XEXE XFFX AXXX AGXG XHAH XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 01001110 101010 10010101 10010111 0101010 10111 100100100 010101 01010110 0111011 10111001 111011 010110 1101 1010100 1101010 010101 1111001 11101 101001 01001110 10101 1011101 111101 010110 010111 1000101 100011101 1001010 1101001 1101110 010101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,008
Words 165
Sentences 9
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 16

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Malevolent fiends are sleeping Hiding safely underground,

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Written on April 03, 2022

Submitted by philip0157 on April 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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