Analysis of Deviated Septum



I long colors from my light
For it's a rainbow that I seek
But when I look and simply ponder
It's white and clear and bleak

I’ll stare so intensely hard
That the spots formed in my eyes
Are Permanently burned
So engraved it makes me cry

I’ll stare so painfully deep
For a glimpse of my mint green
I'll stare an inch to closely
My pupils start to lean

I’ll tumble and fall right in
The clear fluorescent lights
It leaves burn marks on my wrist
For the heat was on to high

My iris shrunk to nothing  
For a smudged morsel of a hope
I leaned my longing to closely
That I fell and broke my nose


Scheme XAXA XXXB XCDC XXXB XXDX
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Quatrain  (40%)
Metre 1110111 1101111 111101010 110101 1110101 1011011 110001 1011111 1111001 1011111 1111110 110111 1100110 01101 1111111 1011111 1101110 10110101 11110110 1110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 602
Words 126
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted by Sproutheadedhurt on May 06, 2022

Modified by Sproutheadedhurt on May 06, 2022

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