Analysis of Another Urn

Jennifer Ames (Pierro) 1981 (San Francisco)



Death comes to us all, as the saying goes,
But there lived a girl with her fair share of woes

She lived a life not dissolute, but not one of piety,
And only those of integrity and loyalty she did seek for society

And at a tender age she met a man,
Who tempered her ambition and asked for her hand

But the fates would not warn her
And too late would she learn,
That to her shelf she'd add yet another urn

Life moved on, as the world keeps turning,
No matter how the seas be violent, seismic, tidal bores churning

Achievement she sought, and did so with zeal,
For it helped to quell the sleep demon's appeal

But her dark family history slowly let itself be known,
And Death's bending sickle, his seeds planted and sown,

So with a weighted heart and tears that burned,
We're added to the shelf, more and more urns

But soon she chose to seek the beauty in life,
To ride the waves of pain and conquer the strife

And for that time, she experienced joy and glee,
The sense of greater purpose and the flight of the free

Until the day of darkness, blood-stained hands,
Her brother murdered with a hammer, a faceless man

She wrote him letters, but never used his full name,
For only his initials could stave off the pain

And in the anguish inside her that repeatedly churned,
She placed on that shelf, yet another urn

What followed was inertia, dissociation of time,
And she relished the punishment of pain sublime

But in moments of passion and a belief in the soul,
She could see kindness around her, and great change was her goal

Yet the rollercoaster world eventually tired her,
And it took more and more effort to move and inspire her

And when the time neared, for her own death,
A twist of fate resulted in her husband's last breath

For a rewind in time, she begged and she yearned,
But placed on her shelf another urn.


Scheme AA BB CX DEE FF GG HH IA JJ BB XC XX IE KK LL DD MM IE
Poetic Form
Metre 1111110101 11101101111 1101111111100 010110100010011110100 0101011101 110001001101 1011110 011111 11011110101 111101110 11010111001010110 0101101111 1111101101 1011001001010111 011010111001 1101010111 1101011011 11111101001 11011101001 011110100101 0111010001101 0101110111 0101010100101 111101101111 110101011101 00010010101001 1111110101 1101010001011 011001001101 10101100001001 11110010011101 10100101000100 01110110110010 010111011 0111010001011 10100111011 111010101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,835
Words 381
Sentences 1
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

It's about trying to overcome multiple deaths, a failed suicide attempt, and the death of the most important person to the woman in the poem. It leaves the reader wondering how she will face this worst of hurdles.

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Written on April 08, 2022

Submitted by sircharlenesir on April 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:55 min read
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Jennifer Ames (Pierro)

Undergrad - UC Berkeley (psychology) Graduate - Brown University (psychology) Veterinary Medicine - Purdue University Oncology Residency - University of Georgia more…

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