Analysis of At the Crossroad of Destiny



At the Crossroad of Destiny

Battling with my own daily strife
I arrived at the main crossroad
Of the destiny of my life,
Where three roads greeted my scrutiny
And a choice had to be made
That would chart my life`s destiny.

The west-bound road, smooth, spacious,
And smacking of wine along the way,
Abounded with sounds of dancing,
Hilarious laughter and music all day
And various kinds of merrymaking
For sheer pleasure of the body.

The second road eastward bound,
Rather rough, rugged and narrow,
Exalted perfumes of incense all around,
With echoes of devotional songs
And chanting of divine scriptures
On the bumpy road all along.

The third road spanning straight forward
Was misty, frosty and scary
And allowed no vision outwards;
Moving ahead was like making
A leap in the immense unknown
And a thought, indeed, saddening.

At the crossroad of destiny,
Knowing not which route to choose,
I closed my eyes to the vicinity
And just immune to the surrounds,
I delved deep down my inner self
To guide me on the route around.

Soon a softly audible voice
Beckoned to me just to embrace
The straight forward road as my choice,
The road that was just full of haze,
But will lead to my destiny
Towards the close of my journey.

Alone without anyone to guide me,
I groped along in the unknown,
Devoid of attachment and free,
Through the misty and frosty haze
For days and days, for weeks and weeks,
Almost famishing in the glaze;

But at the journey`s crucial end,
I was just pleasantly amazed
To glimpse that the last misty bend
Led to my real destiny,
Beyond the maze of spirituality
To the divine sphere of eternity.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1011100 100111101 1011011 10100111 111101100 0011111 11111100 0111110 010110101 01011110 01001001011 0100111 11101010 0101101 10110010 01001101101 110101001 01010110 10101101 01110110 11010010 00111010 10011110 01000101 00101100 1011100 1011111 1111100100 01011001 11111101 11110101 10101001 10111101 01101111 01111111 11111100 01011110 010110111 11010001 01101001 10100101 11011101 11001 1101101 11110001 11101101 1111100 0101100100 1001110100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,620
Words 321
Sentences 7
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 49
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 143
Words per stanza (avg) 32

About this poem

This poem has been inspired by my inner self in my search for the route that will lead me to attaining my deep aspirations towards the close of the journey of my life

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Written on October 16, 2021

Submitted by kguptar on April 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:36 min read
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Krishnanand Guptar

Mauritian poet and financial adviser whose works include a collection of poems "From Humanism to Spirituality" self published in 2021 and a second one "Between Earth and Sky" in 1976 more…

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