Analysis of Reality In A Dream



Distant space between me and reality
My dreams forsaken reaching for a cloud knowing now it's a moisture of tears built by what's inside of me

The blowing of wind like a storm seperation of the mind tho nothing can calm and cannot addurn
no pain for it's torn nerves destroyed shaken no way this can be sewn

Scream Scream Scream take into hand the heavens don't listen will anyone ever understand the waters above and underneath cry with you
I ask what else you want from me

I ran to grab ahold, yet you fled is this the story you uphold.. You behold in asking for attention yet unraveled by the change in the storms direction

I cannot bear tired afraid and scared a man with a child's fear inside.
Can this be true a pain that burns like a rescue flair align the stars parallel     
   The roads give me my own compass it's time for me to follow my own Guide in time it's safe to say what a heart has complished because i control time
 Once i turn the key my pah will align like a life long pause after refelcting the drop of a dime


Scheme AA BB XA B XXCC
Poetic Form
Metre 101011010 11010101011011010111110111 010111011101110110101 1111110110111111 1111011010110110100101001001111 11111111 1111011111101010110101010101010101001010 110110010101101101 1111011110101010110 01111110111111011101111110111011011 11101111011011110101101
Characters 1,085
Words 218
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 1, 4
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 74
Words per line (avg) 18
Letters per stanza (avg) 163
Words per stanza (avg) 40

About this poem

Took alot of personal things and made it a poem to show life, and live, and self leadership.

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Written on March 20, 2022

Submitted by Fige23 on April 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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