Analysis of silent death



I stare blankly at the ceiling in shock it stares back
 I can't believe it.
Apparently, neither cam the ceiling.
 I can hear the wind howling, calling my name
And the roof creaking.
 i can't beleive it.
I can't believe someone finally did it.
 I cried, I think I was going into shock.
 I couldn't hear the wind calling me,
nor could I move.
Silence is all I could hear.
 Silence.
Then, finally, I hear someone,
 more like something,
it was death they'd come to take me.
To the afterlife, that is.
Surprisingly, I wasn't afraid.
 I was finally free,
free of burden and responsibility
 I was at peace.


Scheme ABCDCBBEFGHIJCFKLFFM
Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1110101001111 11011 0100101010 11101101011 00110 1111 1101110011 11111110011 110101101 1111 1011111 10 1100111 1110 11111111 101011 010011001 111001 1110000100 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 609
Words 126
Sentences 13
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 452
Words per stanza (avg) 109

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i don't really know i did this for school and got secod place so my dad told me to submit it here lmao

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Submitted by kkfaith2017 on April 10, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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