Analysis of Stay with me a while



Stay with me a while, with your smile.
Kiss me with those lips that touch my heart and soul; caress my face, stroke my hair give me your deep and loving care.
Brighten my day with with those sparkling eyes that steal my thoughts and rush my blood.
Give me that lasting devotion you know you should.
I’m not a weakling, I’m not so shy, but I need you; at times I cry. I need your all in all.
Stay with me with your smile, don’t let me stumble, don’t let me fall.
Feeling like a darkened forest in the night, like a mountain too high and out of sight, like snow in winter, - covered white.
Like a silent ocean, - deep and sad;  
Whisper your kind and gentle words, - that make me glad.
Stay with me a while with your smile.


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Poetic Form
Metre 11101111 11111111101011111111110101 101111110111110111 111100101111 11010111111111111111101 111111111101111 10101010001101011011111010101 101010101 101101011111 11101111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 736
Words 153
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 55
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 545
Words per stanza (avg) 144

About this poem

It’s part of an anthology of poems written some years ago! It states some strong feelings about caring in all manner of emotions, it’s about love, and the need for love.

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Submitted by tommorley2009 on April 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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T.D.Morley

The poet, is a lyricist, and singer songwriter. He developed poetic licence from a young age, and is now a prolific writer of novels and songs. Born in Liverpool he grew up in the early fifties. He is now semi retired and is active in all manner of things, including, Martial Arts, music, and teaching/tutoring. As a qualified chef he worked in the more…

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