Analysis of WHEN I TALK WITH GOD, I WILL…

Steven Muscarella 1952 (Livingston, MT)



Ask him how he became God - Yahweh?
Ask him how he created the universe?
Ask him how we can be instruments of his love?
Ask him what are the universal truths?
Ask him how we can be there for him?
Ask him how he copes with pain and suffering?
Ask him how I can forgive others and be forgiven?
Ask him how good and evil exists together?

Listen! Listen! Listen!


Scheme XXXXXXAX A
Poetic Form
Metre 11110111 1111010010 111111100111 111100101 111111111 11111110100 11111011001010 111101001010 101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 417
Words 83
Sentences 11
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 36

About this poem

A Free verse poem asking God questions to learn more about him that many people would like to know. These questions have been asked over many generations and by scholars covering many fields of thought and philosophy and religion. I believe going to the source and asking for myself will give me the truth if I only Listen!

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Written on April 12, 2022

Submitted by mustdrum01 on April 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Steven Muscarella

A person who loves to learn and ask questions in hopes of satisfying my curiosity without harming others along the way. My wife and I have been married 37 years and live in Denver, Colorado. more…

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