Analysis of The Breeze That Day



And I let the breeze,
brush on me again and again,
because it is not merely
a cool sensation,
It is filling the void within.


Scheme ABCDE
Poetic Form Tanka  (60%)
Tetractys  (40%)
Cinquain  (20%)
Lanturne  (20%)
Metre 01101 11101001 0111110 01010 11100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 124
Words 28
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

This piece of writing I wrote for a beloved one I lost. The void here symbolizes their absence. And the breeze is them. We tend to associate people who are dead with nature and hence I chose breeze

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Written on 2022

Submitted by bhavyasingh.srinet on May 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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