Analysis of True Feelings
GOD, I AM AN INSIGNIFICANT CREATURE WHO CAN'T SPEAK IN FRONT OF THE LORD OF THE ENTIRE UNIVERSE
BUT MY HEART ACHES INCESSANTLY
AND I HAVE NOBODY WHO CAN COMPREHEND MY FEELINGS
THIS WORLD WOULDN'T BE ANY DIFFERENT IF YOU WOULDN'T HAVE CREATED ME
A MERE BURDEN, A PURPOSELESS SOUL
HOW AM I ANY USE TO YOUR WELL DEVELOPED PLANS
IN THE CYCLE, ONLY I AM DEFEATED
I WANT TO DIE, BUT THE AFTERLIFE MAKES ME NERVOUS
I CAN'T BEAR THE PAIN ANYMORE, IT'S OVERWHELMING
OH CEASE MY LIFE OR TURN ME INTO A EMOTIONLESS CREATURE
CERTAINLY, IT WOULD HAVE BEEN BETTER IF I WAS NORMAL
A HAPPY CHILDHOOD, A LOVING MOTHER AND A JOYFUL ADULTHOOD
ATLAST MY LIFE IS JUST A EXCRUCIATING JOURNEY
EVERY SECOND FEELS LIKE A THOUSAND CENTURIES
BUT I CAN'T COMPLAIN ANYWAY, IT'S THE GOD'S PLAN
I HAVE SPENT TWENTY YEARS BUT I CAN SEE NO GAIN
NO PURPOSE BUT ONLY HARDSHIPS AND PAIN
AS I GROW UP, LIFE BECOMES A DESERT PLANE
SAVE ME OH LORD, SAVE ME, MY MIND IS RUNNING INSANE
EVERY MINUTE, AN URGE TAKES BREATHE TO CUT MY VEINS
BATH IN MY BLOOD AND LAUGH ON MY MISERY
AS I KNOW, ONCE I WILL DIE, MY LIFE WILL CERTAINLY BECOME EASY
Scheme | ABCBDEFGHIJKBLMNNNNOBB |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111010010111011011001010 11110100 01111101110 1110110100111010101 011001001 1111011110101 00101011010 111110101110 11101011010 1111111010110 10011111011110 010101010001001 111110010010 1001011010100 11101101011 111101111111 1101101001 11111010101 1111111111001 1001011111111 10110111100 11111111111000110 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,132 |
Words | 230 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 22 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 39 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 868 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 210 |
About this poem
The poem is my real life story.
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Written on May 15, 2022
Submitted by ayemun2000 on May 13, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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