Analysis of Goodbye



I know tonight on her bed she'll lay
Feeling down and upset
Knowing I haven't seen her throughout the day
Hoping sleep can make her forget
Tears soaking her pillow
Wishing to me, she could fly
In her room stuck like hay in a silo
Knowing all I would say is bye
Forgiving me,I hope she may
But sometimes goodbye is the best way


Scheme ABABCDCDAA
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Metre 110110111 101001 10110100101 10111001 110010 1011111 0011110010 10111111 0101111 10111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 328
Words 67
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 259
Words per stanza (avg) 64

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Submitted by Optimistic on May 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Richard Ochieng

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