Analysis of A person who brings pain



He’s screams
He hits
He calls me names
He cheats
He spits
All he does is bring me pain
I cry I wipe
I feel like nothing will be the same
I pray everyday for God to come my way
I turn every corner all I can see are people laughing and judging me.
No one to turn no one to talk to holding my daughters hand the one I only have .
We run away from all the pain 8 months pregnant I see life isn’t a game
Young and dumb I call myself
2 kids I have and no one else .
Young I am that is what they call me
I used to be the beauty queen
The cheerleader
How happy I used to be
Until I met you
And how you turned me
How I have to my happiness are my kids .
We leave far away to be happy
All that bring me smile and peace are my kids being happy .


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Poetic Form
Metre 11 11 1111 11 11 1111111 1111 111101101 11101111111 11100101111110100101 111111111101101011101 11011101110111101 101111 1110111 111111111 11110101 010 1101111 01111 01111 11111100111 111011110 11111011111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 757
Words 182
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 561
Words per stanza (avg) 167

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Getting out of abusive relationship

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Written on June 02, 2022

Submitted by zaynaelmasri21 on June 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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