Analysis of COLDER



 She is colder than
Most with emotions.
   With her it's just going
Through the motions.

Her wanton ways and
Perfect figure.
  No hesitation when she
Pulls the trigger.

Her tan skin and
Dark eyes.
  BEWARE! A word
To the wise.

Her full lips,
Her long fingernails.
  She is 100%
Bone-a-fide female.

You smile when you
See her look.
  You're guessing, she is
A closed book.

Her radiant smile sets
You at ease.
  The way she moves,
With expertise.

She is at her weakest
In the morning.
  She never prepares when
She hears the warning.

No matter what,
A smile on her face.
  It's like she has
Fallen from grace.

You can envy her
Lack of attention.
  Easy going, calm,
No sign of tension.

No emotions show
In her eyes.
  No hint of confusion,
Or look of surprise.

She is not stuck-up
Doesn't brag or boast.
  Be careful,
She is colder than most.


Scheme XABA CDXD CEXE XXFX XGFG XHXH XBXB XIXI DJXJ XEJE XKXK
Poetic Form Quatrain  (91%)
Metre 11101 11010 101110 1010 01010 0110 101011 1010 0110 11 0101 101 011 0110 11 1011 1111 101 11011 011 010011 111 0111 101 111010 0010 110011 11010 1101 01101 1111 1011 11100 11010 10101 11110 10101 001 111010 11101 11111 10111 110 111011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 896
Words 195
Sentences 24
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

Loving someone who is cold as ice.

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Written on June 01, 2022

Submitted by Turbo1904 on June 02, 2022

Modified on April 06, 2023

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