Analysis of Open to a recieving sun



Open to a recieving sun

Softly swaying grass
bending in the gentle wind
Between the lonely
blades of green and the stars above

descend into living of the grass
roots that sleep beneath the waking times

in the fragile music of our lives
motionless movement through our mind
balanced between the moving stillness

wakes to strip the veils they leave
in the early morning amidst the trees

hand to ground seeds are sown
flowers spring from waking roots
open to a receiving sun

in the shades of fields of corn

Dances of light and shadow play


Scheme A BCXX BX XCX XX XXA X X
Poetic Form
Metre 101011 10101 1000101 01010 11100101 010110101 111010101 0010101101 100101101 100101010 1110111 0010100101 111111 1011101 10100101 0011111 1011011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 548
Words 103
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 2, 3, 2, 3, 1, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 55
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted by sunrasmoondog on June 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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