Analysis of the birds could not sing
V.
time became irrelevant
night and day were shrouded
in its monochromia
so the birds could not sing
IV.
the scythe of Death was
neither long nor
sharp enough
so the birds could not sing
III.
air choked on
its own heavy heart
let it cry out
so the birds could not sing
II.
the last one to move
was the last leaf to fall
from the last barren “tree”
so the birds could not sing
I.
silence echoed
hope became desperate
losing its own touch
so the birds could not sing
Scheme | axxxB axxxB cxxxB cxxaB cxxxB |
---|---|
Poetic Form | Tetractys (52%) |
Metre | 1 1010100 101010 011 101111 1 01111 1011 101 101111 1 111 11101 1111 101111 1 01111 101111 101101 101111 1 1010 10110 10111 101111 |
Closest metre | Iambic dimeter |
Characters | 476 |
Words | 105 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 5, 5, 5, 5 |
Lines Amount | 25 |
Letters per line (avg) | 15 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 73 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 18 |
About this poem
I wrote this poem to comment on the development of climate change, and the insufficient recognition it has gained in recent years.
Font size:
Written on May 15, 2022
Submitted by hannahc2024 on May 15, 2022
Modified on April 27, 2023
- 31 sec read
- 52 Views
Citation
Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:
Style:MLAChicagoAPA
"the birds could not sing" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 29 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/129418/the-birds-could-not-sing>.
Discuss this Hannah Capone poem analysis with the community:
Report Comment
We're doing our best to make sure our content is useful, accurate and safe.
If by any chance you spot an inappropriate comment while navigating through our website please use this form to let us know, and we'll take care of it shortly.
Attachment
You need to be logged in to favorite.
Log In