Analysis of Until One Day



Lately she's been talking alot with Jesus,
To take her burden, and cover up all her bruises,
And to take from her all her ugly scars,
That she feels is tearing her life apart,
With all the ugly she's wearing on her body,
She think's "how is anyone supposed to love me",
With all the bruises and scar's she's wearing,
How's anyone supoosed to look past her appearance,
She pray's to God she could be reencarnated,
And just come back as somebody different,
She want's to start a new life,
Instead of piercing her heart with a knife,
She hate's the person that look's back at her in the mirror,
She think's she's so ugly and her image is never any clearer,
Her skin with all these datk spot's,
And all those ugly scar's and dark thought's,
She carrie's all her life long trama,
That's alway's causing her drama,
Her brain is filled with awful thought's of suicide,
She also know's there's nowhere to run and hide,
She just want's to make it to heaven's gate,
But from here, she feel's there's just no escape,
So for now she'll just keep writing on this paper,
Until one day, she get's to meet her maker.


Scheme ABCDEEFGDHIIJJAAKKLLMNJJ
Poetic Form
Metre 10111001110 1101001011010 0111010101 1111100101 110101101010 11111001111 1101001110 11011110010 11111111 0111110100 1111011 0111001101 11010111100010 11111000101101010 0111111 011101011 1110111 1110010 01111101110 1101111101 1111111101 1111111101 111111101110 01111111010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,100
Words 227
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 841
Words per stanza (avg) 204

About this poem

This poem I was trying to base on suicide prevention or suicide... This subject is something that I have experienced in the past...

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Written on April 28, 2022

Submitted by Jaynjay34 on May 02, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jessica Jasper

I try to base my poems on the things I have experienced or the things that I have been thru myself... The biggest payoff that I could ever get is my poems helping someone else that are experiencing those things, and hopefully help save a life!!! more…

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