Analysis of The perfect spring.

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)

Ode


I canoed the valleys leading to a pool
And it was so perfect, beautiful a hole
In the landscape
Like before a rowed bowl of jelly
Perfectly smooth circle of blue.


Scheme ABCDE
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Tanka  (40%)
Cinquain  (20%)
Lanturne  (20%)
Metre 10101010101 01110110001 001 101011110 10011011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 163
Words 32
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 130
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Written on June 15, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on June 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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