Analysis of Live this way

Amyg 1983 (Bangor)



Why must you keep starting shit?
I left 15 years when you decided to hit.
You say you wanted me for life,
Thought one day I would be your wife.
I thought one day that would be,
But we always fought you and me.
I kept saying I couldn't live that way,
Wishing it would change so I could stay.
But I couldn't handle it,
Especially since I got hit.


Scheme AABBCCDDAA
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Metre 1111101 111111011 11110111 11111111 1111111 1111101 1110110111 101111111 1110101 0101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 344
Words 79
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 263
Words per stanza (avg) 70
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Written on June 06, 2022

Submitted by Amyg on July 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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