Analysis of Vision

Hasan Johnson 1980 (Peoria Illinois)



Had you
Lost you
Now it’s hard to focus
Nightmares and bad dreams
Toss me in a fight for sleep
Days drag by
My exhaustion finds no peace
All mistakes made
No right moves, not one
If you returned to me
Then life would be more fun
A man without vision
What kind of man is he


Scheme AABCDEFGHIHHI
Poetic Form
Metre 11 11 111110 1011 1100111 111 1010111 1011 11111 110111 111111 010110 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 281
Words 64
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 214
Words per stanza (avg) 57

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Written on July 06, 2022

Submitted by HasanM.Johnson on July 06, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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