Analysis of A House, In Time.
This house has long since been forgotten -
Its floorboards groan and scream in
Remembrance of ghost’s footsteps treading still
Are the walls - whose only movement comes
From whispering winds sneaking secrets through the cracks.
Cracks - each a portal in time:
Here is a child falling, here is someone playing catch in the house,
Here is a first kiss, and here, well here is the present - a memoir.
Grass springs through the wooded ground,
Caressing the planks in nature's embrace.
A vision overtakes me, the house is gone -
Replaced by a great grass field full and wide.
The laughter of children wearing clothes unbeknownst to history echoes backward.
I sit down to better take in the feeling -
Dust kicking up in swirling moats that resembles
Solutions mix together in a beaker, becoming one.
This time, this life, this house: threads from a spool,
Whirling together to form a beautiful canvas.
I see a mother bathing her newborn babes.
I see a father putting food on the table.
I see a group of gamblers, a group of police,
A group of workers, a group of merchants,
Of scholars, of doctors, of farmers, of friends -
I see a blazing flame!
I see everything, but none of it at all.
The door creaks on its un-oiled hinges, squeaking in pain.
The sun no longer pierces the drapes,
The building becomes dark once again.
The clapboards drum against the building,
But the rhythm has long since died.
All I feel are the splinters of wood upon my fingers drawing blood,
No, that blood is dried.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111111010 111010 010111101 101110101 110011010101 1101001 110110111101001 110110111101001 1110101 0100101001 0101010111 110111101 01011010100111001010 11111010010 110101011010 010101000100101 1111111101 1001011010010 11010100101 110101011010 110111001101 0111001110 11011011011 110101 1110111111 0111111101001 01110101 010011101 01101010 10101111 1111011101110101 11111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,515 |
Words | 298 |
Sentences | 16 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 18, 14 |
Lines Amount | 32 |
Letters per line (avg) | 37 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 586 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 134 |
About this poem
This poem was written based on trying to recapture old memories and look toward future ones. The general premise was to try and keep a strong visual image throughout.
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Written on March 18, 2022
Submitted by r49erfan on June 05, 2022
Modified on March 18, 2023
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