Analysis of ALONE



The loneliness, it smothers me,
But the darkness seems welcoming.
The light dims more each day,
As the shadows call my name.

I cling to the solitude,
It becomes my home.
It keeps me protected,
But it keeps me alone.

The walls that shelter me,
Imprison me just the same.
Each brick molded by experience
Each memory colored by pain.

Towering high above me,
A fortress I have created.
Each stone was cast at me
From the walls of a heart so jaded.


Scheme AXXB XXCX ABXX ACAC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 01001101 10101100 011111 101111 111010 10111 111010 111101 011101 0101101 111010100 11001011 1001011 01011010 111111 101101110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 456
Words 101
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 21

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When you have hurt enough that you are fearful of new relationships....

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Written on June 04, 2022

Submitted by jerrylogie on June 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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