Analysis of Awakening



It isn’t the truck grinding out disdain  
in the morning’s half-light alley  
or the backdoor cricket scratching a limb  
that unhinges me from my dreams.

Percussions of the night  
find their rightful place in dreams
shaking chains from the other side  
like the unrequited Marley.  

The trespass that jogs me up  
is a welcome footfall that slips between us
smooth as paper under Christmas ribbon
and a precious limb sure to push against my ribs

nudging into my soul
to let me know  
that even in the deepest reverie
or across the widest Lethe  

Wherever I step, he will follow.  


Scheme XAXB XBXA XXXX XCAX C
Poetic Form
Metre 110110101 00101110 101101001 111111 1101 1110101 10110101 1001010 011111 1010111011 1110101010 001011110111 100111 1111 1100010100 1010101 010111110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 600
Words 122
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

Regarding my 3-year-old son when he would sleepwalk into our bedroom to slip in and dream between us.

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Written on September 20, 2020

Submitted by richardkurtz on June 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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