Analysis of Hurt



It hurts me
To see where you are
And know
That there’s nothing i can do
No matter how much i want
No matter how much i wish
No matter how much i try
I can’t
Find a solution
To the problems
That eat you away
No matter how much I ask
No matter how much I worry
No matter how much I try
I can’t
Do anything
To heal your pain
And that
That
Hurts me


Scheme abcdefGHijklaGHmnooa
Poetic Form Tetractys  (35%)
Metre 111 11111 01 1110111 1101111 1101111 1101111 11 10010 1010 11101 1101111 11011110 1101111 11 110 1111 01 1 11
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 350
Words 77
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 265
Words per stanza (avg) 77

About this poem

This poem was one that I wrote in hopes that it can relate to those who can't help the ones they want to help the most. Some problems must be solved by the one enduring it, and not from those who want to help.

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Written on April 20, 2022

Submitted by Eiden on June 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Eiden Choe

I grew up the oldest in a family of four sons. I'm a senior in high school out in the suburbs of California. I love sports, with a passion for basketball and Jiu-Jitsu, hanging out with my brothers, and reading anything I can get my hands on! The big dream is to one day allow my family the pleasure of living without any financial struggle! more…

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