Analysis of My Future Forever

Jimmy Ash 1983 (Saint Louis, Missouri)



All I needed was a tiny dose of you
To bring back my lost creativity
My emotions rapidly bleed through
In eloquent fashion for you all to see.

I get addicted to the inspiration
I become immune to the world below
We talk of fate with an anticipation
That the star we wish upon will make it so

It's been lifetimes chasing after this
It'll be another day to wait and see
The opportunity that we won't miss
Because all of you is all of me.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EBEB
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11101010111 111110100 101010011 01001011111 1101010010 1010110101 1111110010 10111011111 11110101 10101011101 001001111 011111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 438
Words 90
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 115
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

A poem written for the woman who sets my soul ablaze.

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Written on June 01, 2022

Submitted by JimmyAsh83 on June 08, 2022

Modified on March 09, 2023

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Jimmy Ash

I had numerous poems published since 1998, when I was a teenager in my Sophomore year. Aspiring novelist. more…

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